Thursday, March 19, 2009

Earth, Water, Fire and Wind

Earth is my greatest home
Where every living thing roams
Land that is full of colorful things
That the mankind must unite in nature preserving

Water for rivers, seas, lakes and oceans
A symbol of life that should not be ignore even for once
It’s for everyone’s duty and call
Because the benefits of it is for all

Fire as a symbol of warm hearts
As warm as the welcome of a brotherhood’s arms
A flambeau in every life
And a hope for tomorrow in sight

Wind has called my name
Even though unseen, but eases those pain
A sweet music that floats in the air
That promises everything will be okay

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

You have an exceptional gift for words, I noticed. However, try to be a sort of an artist when you write. Don't be afraid of crossing that line.

Are you also familiar with the poetry of e.e cummings? If not, I suggest you grab one of his collection at the bookstore. Later you may want to study the writings of T.S. Eliot. Older masters usually best to rediscover once we get familiar with the writings of the contemporary writers.

Good luck and just keep on writing okay! Patience is everything.

ZereenHeart said...

thanks for the comment :) i appreciate it!

i'm not familiar with it but when i have time, i'll try to look for it at the bookstore.

thanks for reading my blog!